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Your love had a cost,
I paid for with naivity.
All for the chance,
That you might one day believe in me.

To touch and to hold,
That I might be so bold.
As to ask for a kiss,
But you didn't grant me this.

Instead you gave me false hope,
And a little bit more rope.
But in the end what does it mean?
I just can't miss a girl I've never seen.

So you can keep your heart,
Put it with the pieces of mine.
You can carry on lying,
I'll pretend that I'm fine.

And so I'll say goodbye,
One more thing before we part.
Please try not to break,
The broken pieces of my heart.
©2008-2009 ~BlinkinTurtle
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Meh.

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:icondarkest-concubine:
Awe... Its sad, but beautiful.
I love it.
And I love yooou.

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"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams
:iconblinkinturtle:
Thank you.

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Yet I am not sorry that I loved you—ah! what else had I a boy to do,—
For the hungry teeth of time devour, and the silent-footed years pursue.
:iconbittersweet-rose:
"I just can't miss a girl I've never seen"

i really love that line :) desperately anguished write but soft somehow, amazing :hug:

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"I'm not anti-social; I just can't stand people." - Justin Taylor, QAF
:iconblinkinturtle:
Thank you, my dear.

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Yet I am not sorry that I loved you—ah! what else had I a boy to do,—
For the hungry teeth of time devour, and the silent-footed years pursue.
:iconlederhosen-baby:
just a quick pain in the arse grammar thing -

it's spelt naivety, i think.



your writing's always so sad! beautiful, but sad.

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you know you want to.
:iconblinkinturtle:
Bah.

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Yet I am not sorry that I loved you—ah! what else had I a boy to do,—
For the hungry teeth of time devour, and the silent-footed years pursue.
:iconmisssnowflake:
Pain can be beautiful, as you've just shown. If she would break your heart, she is not worth the pieces.
:iconblinkinturtle:
Thank you. It's good to get an actual response.

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Yet I am not sorry that I loved you—ah! what else had I a boy to do,—
For the hungry teeth of time devour, and the silent-footed years pursue.

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